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Friday, May 2, 2008

The Lost Scene: NaruHina Lemon

Author: Sarah Rebecca
Disclaimer-Naruto is the brainchild of Masashi Kishimoto

Author’s Note: OK, so putting off studying again is never a bad thing for you guys. I just keep on writing. So, I finally decided to do it. Write the lemon that you guys didn’t see in my story.



Hinata and Naruto hadn’t moved for the past ten minutes. After being shoved in the room and locked in, the still sat in their original positions, Naruto on the edge of the bed, Hinata up against the pillows.

Naruto sighed.

“A-Ano, I-I guess we should g-get s-s-started,” stuttered Hinata, poking her index fingers together.

Naruto only scrunched his brow. She was nervous, he could tell as much, and probably didn’t even want to do this.

They should have just left when they had the chance.

“Hinata, we don’t have to do this,” said Naruto, moving up next to her so that he was leaning on the pillows as well.

There was a long silence that followed. Naruto sighed again.

“Look, Hinata-”

Naruto was cut off by her soft lips pressing on his lips. Hinata drew back and gave him a glance of exasperation.

Naruto cocked his head at her look.

“You don’t understand Naruto, I want this really badly, I-I’m just scared because I want it so badly and I’m scared about…” Hinata trailed off, casting her eyes downward.

“What are you scared about?” asked Naruto, putting his finger under her chin and lifting it upwards so that she was staring at him right in the eye.

Hinata drew her lips closer to his and barely touched her lips to his.

“My father and Neji-niisan,” whispered Hinata against Naruto’s lips.

The act sent shivers up and down Naruto’s spine.

“Well, they’re not watching now, are they?” whispered Naruto against Hinata’s lips.

Hinata shook her head in response, a permanent blush seeming to mark her face.

“Go slow, OK?” whispered Hinata.

Naruto only nodded before closing the gap between their lips. He continued to kiss her soft lips gently, soon prodding her lower lip with his tongue, begging for entrance.

Hinata obliged and let him explore the cavern of her mouth. Hinata timidly touched her tongue to Naruto’s, making him almost moan with the pleasure from it.

They continued on until Hinata and Naruto were fighting with their tongues, playing a game of cat and mouse.

Naruto started to panic when he realized what he would have to do next, as they had been making out for quite a while now.

Take off her shirt.

Oh, he’d love to just rip it off of her right now, but she for him to go slow. He’d be patient, he’d wait forever if it made her happy.

Hinata broke away from his mouth and Naruto went into a frenzied mode.

Did he do something wrong? Was he going to fast?

“Naruto-kun,” whispered Hinata, grabbing the sides of his face, so that he was looking into her mesmerizing lavender eyes, “I said to go slow, but if we keep going at this pace, we’ll be dead before we ever get to the sex part of this.”

Hinata giggled at the blush which splattered Naruto’s face.

Naruto grinned devilishly.

“As you wish, my dear princess,” Naruto teased, before crashing his lips down onto hers, this time with more aggression than before.

Naruto fumbled with the edge of her shirt as he continued to dominate her mouth. Naruto finally found the zipper to her shirt and zipped it down quickly, removing her shirt and throwing it into the corner of the room.

Naruto felt Hinata whine into his mouth when she began fumbling with the edge of his shirt. He temporarily broke the kiss long enough to pull his shirt over his head, before crashing his lips down onto hers again.

Hinata smiled into the kiss as she played with Naruto’s abs, running her fingers up and down his well-trained abs. The sensual shivers continued to go up and down Naruto’s spine.

Naruto felt the soft, pale skin of her stomach, feeling her shiver from the act. Naruto moved his mouth away from hers and began to give her butterfly kisses on her chest and neck.

Hinata moaned at the kisses, which only urged Naruto to go further and further down. Hinata played with the tussle of his spiky, blonde hair as he continued to move down her chest.

Naruto was prohibited by the black bra Hinata was wearing. Naruto fumbled with the hooks of her bra, while Naruto moved his mouth up to hers again.

Naruto growled when the hooks just wouldn’t come undone.

Hinata pulled away from the kiss and giggled at Naruto’s actions.

“How do girls do this all the time?” mumbled Naruto, still fumbling with the hooks.

Hinata grabbed Naruto’s hands and led them behind her back, guiding him in unhooking the straps of her bra.

Naruto slowly removed her bra and threw it across the room.

Naruto looked down at Hinata, who was staring up at him, with expecting eyes. He took in her whole upper body.

He looked at her hard soft, pink nipples and her plump breasts which he couldn’t take his eyes off of.

She was even more beautiful than he fantasized she’d be.

Naruto crushed his mouth down upon hers and began playing with her nipple with his thumb, going in a circular motion.

Hinata gasped and began to breathe shallower.

Naruto continued to do that with his right hand, while his left hand started to unbutton her pants.

Hinata understood and removed her hands from his hair and unbuttoned his pants as well. Hinata pulled them down off of Naruto, as he did to her.

Naruto moved to her other breast, using his thumb to make circular motions there, causing her to moan in ecstasy.

Then he moved his mouth down onto her right nipple and began to suck on in. Hinata almost screamed in pleasure, she never knew Naruto could bring her so much pleasure.

“Mmm…Naruto keep going,” moaned Hinata, as Naruto moved onto her other breast.

Hinata began to fumble with the edges of his boxers, wanting them off.


Naruto grinned when he felt Hinata slowly slip down his boxers.

“Not fair, I’m naked before you are,” whispered Naruto, removing his mouth from her breast.

“Fix it then,” moaned Hinata.

Naruto reached down to her underwear and could feel her wetness leaking through her underwear.

Naruto moved his head down to her underwear and slid them off with his teeth.

“There, now we’re even,” laughed Naruto.

Hinata giggled at his antics.

Naruto moved his mouth onto hers again as she ran her fingers up and down his abs. Hinata continued to do so, not knowing what was about to come.

Unknown to Hinata, Naruto was slowing moving his fingers to her womanhood and was devilishly grinning into their kiss.

Naruto suddenly thrust his two fingers up her womanhood, earning an orgasmic scream come from Hinata.

Naruto pulled his fingers out and licked them. Man, did she taste good.

Hinata pouted.

“That was mean Naruto,” she mumbled, averting her eyes away from him.

Naruto grinned sheepishly.

“Sorry, I couldn’t resist,” he mumbled, scratching his head.

Hinata blushed profusely.

“Will you do it again?” whispered Hinata, her face seemingly getting redder by the second.

Naruto grinned and brought his mouth down to hers and took his fingers and put them in her again. This time though, he removed them and pushed them back in, pumping them in quickly and then removing them.

Hinata moaned and scratched her nails softly on Naruto’s back.

Naruto removed his fingers and licked them again. He looked at Hinata, who was breathing deeply.

“Hinata if you want to stop-” began Naruto.

“No, I’m ready, I realize this’ll hurt, but it’ll be worth it, besides we’ve already come this far,” said Hinata, smiling up at him and tracing the lines on his face.

Naruto only nodded.

Naruto moved his throbbing member down near the entrance of her womanhood. He slowly pushed into her, making sure to take it slow.

Naruto felt himself reach her hymen and knew this was going to put her in pain, and prepared himself.

He thrust into her harder, enough to start going through her hymen. Hinata screamed and dug her nails into his back, making his bleed, but he didn’t feel the pain.

Naruto winced at her painful screams, but kept going, reminding himself that she wouldn’t be in pain forever.

Naruto kept going until he felt her hot core, Hinata’s orgasmic screams propelled him as he pulled his member out of her and thrust into her again, this time harder, no hymen blocking his way.

He thrust into her again and again, realizing that she was reaching her climax.

Naruto thrust into her one more time, her walls clamping down on his member, causing him to groan in pleasure.

Naruto thrust into her a bit farther and Hinata felt as though her hot core exploded as she came and screamed Naruto’s name.

Her walls became so tight then that Naruto screamed as well and came into her, reaching his climax as well.

Naruto and Hinata lay in a sticky, sweaty mess. The blankets were strewn everywhere and the room smelled of sex.

Naruto removed his member out of her and pulled the covers up over themselves. Hinata was still deeply panting at his side.

Naruto grabbed Hinata’s waist and pulled her up against his bare chest. She curled up against him and sighed.

“That was…different,” Hinata panted, a smile painted on her face.

“You wouldn’t object to trying it again, would you?” asked Naruto.

“Just give me a few minutes to breathe.”


Author’s Notes: I hope that wasn’t too bad for my first lemon . I just thought that I needed to write it, since so many people are always like, “write lemons!!” So I did. Happy now? XD I hope that it didn’t suck.

I picture Sakura losing her virginity at lot different from Hinata losing hers. Because I mean come on this is Hinata we’re talking about. And plus, Naruto is not Sasuke. I don’t think that NaruHina lemons are supposed to be possessive and dark…but whatever if you think they are


Anonymous said...

holy crapa moly!!!! that was AZUM!!!!! u should write more like this!!

Anonymous said...

that was a really good lemon. i like lemons ^_^ both lemons XD i see in various parts of your blog you have words in another language. so what language do you speak?


hahaha... i'm not the writer. so i can't continue another lemon like this.
to prince: i speak Indonesian language (bahasa)

sugar Candy said...

I love dis lemon or sex story most ppl think Naruto should b with sakura but in the pain fight he looked like he loved Hinata :3