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Tuesday, May 6, 2008

The Notebook

I'm too lazy to be working on another full movie/Naruto story.

Disclaimer: I owneth not, the Notebook, Naruto, nor Shikatema.

So I'll be doing the first chapter where they meet. In the future I may update it, but that's like IFFY. Very iffy.
So be prepared for a oneshot. X

Btw, I changed a little bit of it, to fit their personalities. So get over it.


The Notebook

Author: amanda devaine

"So...freaking...troublesome..." Shikamaru dragged his feet along in the dirt and rocks that they spread around the Carnival for some craptastic reason. Why I allowed Chouji to bring me to carnival in the first place is beyond me. I knew he'd be eating the whole time...

Munch munch. Shikamaru cringed. Chouji was eating his fourth cotton candy now.

"Hey Chouji, aren't you sick of the stuff by now?"

"Nah, it's good," Chouji ate the rest in a bite. "Oooh look kettel corn!" Chouji ran off to the kettle corn stand.

Shikamaru nearly gagged. So much sugar would have made him regurgitate hours ago. He wandered over to the bumper cars, the closest ride to where he was standing, and leaned on the edge, watching the miniature cars whizz by. Almost hypnotizing...almost like those clouds... Shikamaru thought as his eyelids started closing. Even the motors and the smell of gas could not thorougly keep him awake.

Suddenly, he felt a crash against his arms, stomach, and legs and he flew back. "What the...?" Shikamaru stood up and rubbed his head. He saw a car that hit the wall he was using as his leaning post. "Sorry," the blonde haired girl in the car winked at him and drove off, bumping into one of her friends.

Shikamaru's mouth was wide open as his eyes followed her driving around the track. "Hey Shikamaru!" Chouji yelled.

"Yeah?" Shikamaru asked as he waved his hand to him as if saying "Go away"

"Uh...what are you doing?"

"Huh?" Shikamaru, the boy with an amazing high IQ asked stupidly. "Oh right, uh...nothing..Just watching the bumper cars," Shikamaru put on his usual lazy face.

Chouji saw through his ruse. "You saw a girl didn't you?" Chouji asked between munches. "Who is she?" Chouji asked curiously looking from girl to girl.

"Is it her?" Chouji pointed to a brunette with two buns on either side of her head talking to her long, black-haired friend.

Shikamaru realized it would be pointless to argue, since Chouji was already on to him. He sighed, "No."

"What about the one talking to her?" Chouji inquired.

"That's a guy..." Shikamaru stated as though it were the most obvious thing in the world, although, it really wasn't.

"Really!?" he laughed.

"Yes, Chouji."

"Hmm.." Chouji finished his kettle corn and tossed it into the trash can conventiently placed right next to them. "Hmm..." he repeated and put a hand up to his chin. "Her?" He pointed to a girl with suspicious looking pink hair.

" hair is pink..." Shikamaru stated bluntly, his eyes wide open in shock. "Unless you didn't notice..." Shikamaru teased.

"Oh, I noticed. It looks alot like cotton candy..." Chouji gazed lovingly.

"Ew, Chouji..." Shikamaru shook his head at him disapprovingly.

" it her?" Chouji pointed to a blonde with a long pony-tail. Her back was turned to the both of them.

"That's Ino!" Shikamaru had a look of horror on his face. The most troublesome woman ever...Other than my mother...

"I give up! Who is it?!"

Shikamaru hesitated for a moment. "Her," he pointed toward the girl who was getting up from her bumper car. She walked over to her red haired...male...friend and laughed.

"She's got a boyfriend...figures..." Shikamaru sighed.

"You don't know that!" Chouji piped up enthusiastically.

"Uh, yeah Chouji, I'm pretty sure she d--" But he couldn't finish his sentence because Chouji grabbed him and pulled him over to the girl and her alleged boyfriend.

"Uhh...hello?" The girl asked confusedly. She was still latched onto her friend. He's really odd looking. Why would such a beautiful girl go out with someone like him? Is that eyeliner? And I don't see any eyebrows...What a freak...

Chouji elbowed Shikamaru in the stomach. "Uh.. hi, my name's Shikamaru, and I was just wondering..." he paused as if he had forgotten what he was going to say.

"Yes?" the blonde cocked an eyebrow.

"...if you would like to go out on a date with me...on Friday..." Shikamaru asked quickly, before he lost his confidence again.

"I'm sorry..." she tried letting him down easily, "I can't..."

"Is it that you're busy or you just don't want to go with me?" Shikamaru was getting annoyed. How could she turn him down so crudely?

"Do you really want me to answer that question?" she asked.

"Yes, or else I would never have asked it," Shikamaru persisted.

"I just don't want to," she started to walk away and tugged her bizarre friend along.



"What's your name?"

"Temari," and with that she walked away.

There was no way Shikamaru could be forgotten so easily. The usually lazy boy wracked his brains for a way to get her to notice him. Normally, he wouldn't ask for help but...


"Yes?" he was licking at some ice cream now.

"What do I do?"

"Just forget about her," he said as if he knew something about the matter, "It helps..."

"I can't, buddy...I just...can't..." He was sitting down on a bench when he noticed her getting on the ferris wheel, dragging along her boyfriend.

"She's dating someone, dude," Chouji said between licks, "I mean, why else would she reject you that way?"

"I don't care if she has a boyfriend..I'm going to win her heart..." Shikamaru put his hands into the shape of a circle and leaned over as if thinking hard. After several silent minutes...

"I got it. Chouji, stay here." He ran full speed toward the ferris wheel.

"What are you doing?!" Chouji asked worriedly.

"Trust me!" Shikamaru said as he was almost there. He ran straight up past the line. As her little gondola went by he grabbed the bar right in front of it hung there. The ferris wheel went almost to the top, then apparently the conductor realized what had happened and stopped it abruptly.

He heard the annoyed voice of someone below. "Hey, you can't do that!! Get down from there!"

"No!" Shikamaru shouted back.

"What do you want?" Temari asked with a worried look on her face.

"Go out with me," Shikamaru persisted.

"No!" Temari refused, "Now get down from there!"

Shikamaru carelessly let go with one hand. "Go out with me or I'm letting go with the other hand," Temari clutched the hand of her friend tightly.

"Are you crazy?!" she screamed at him.

"Probably..." Shikamaru swung back and forth slightly, "Go out with me?"

"Yes, yes fine I'll go out with you!" Temari shouted worriedly. "Now please, just get down!"

"Okay," he said as he shimmied over and sat right between her and her red haired friend.

"I hope your boyfriend doesn't mind," Shikamaru stated bluntly.

"My boyfriend?!" Temari laughed.

"What...?" Shikamaru asked confused.

"This is my BROTHER!" she continued laughing, yet her brother remained absolutely quiet.

Shikamaru sweatdropped.


Well there ya go. Like I said it may remain a oneshot. Most likely

But yeahh. I hope you liked. If I get enough reviews I may just put their second date. I don't know. X

I've only seen the Notebook once so if it's way off I'm sorry. Don't shoot me.

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